Monday, 7 May 2012

Dust It Off Bloghop: Day 2 & Day 3 (because exam revision is a killer!)

I know, I'm awful, but I've been revising sociology, feminist/marxist/funtionalist/new right perspectives on The Family/Education/Religion (yes, 2 years in one, people - I must be mad!). So, first of all, here's my excerpt of FREEING FERGUS REILLY: (to put it in context, Fergus has been found in a compromising position with his lady-love's evil best friend Mia, but it was all a set-up)


'Oi - POTATO!’
Fergus grimaced – he doubted anyone would be shouting at an actual potato, so he assumed that this was some idiot’s idea of an anti-Irish joke.


He turned around. ‘Very good – because I’ve never heard that one before.’


Liam Parker ignored him, and started to approach. There was murder in his eyes. Mia must have told him what had happened – but not before putting her own spin on things, the bitch.


‘Come over here and face me like a man, leprechaun,’ Liam carried on angrily, although he was obviously struggling to think of more insults.


Fergus walked calmly up to him, and was pleased to find that, far from being a ‘leprechaun’ he was slightly taller than Liam. Liam looked a little unnerved, and for a moment seemed like he was going to lose his cool. He stayed silent, but something was brewing, his face slowly going red. Whether it was with anger or embarrassment, it was hard to tell.


Daisy, Faith and Mia were shooting him evil looks, and turned to glance at Liam’s friends, who were looking slightly awkward but at the same time, aggressive. Alex, ever the conscientious objector, was biting his lip and seemed rather worried.


Fergus turned back to Liam again.
‘Sorry, where were we?’ He raised an eyebrow, and tried to ignore the feeling of unease that was making his stomach churn.


Smack! Liam’s fist connected with his jaw. White-hot pain shot up his face, nearly as bad as when his dad hit him. He stumbled backwards, and Liam looked smug.
‘Leave Mia alone, freak, and go back to Daisy – I know you Irish like gingers.’


In a second Fergus had jumped on an unsuspecting Liam. The pair fell to the floor, raining down punches, kicks, and (in Liam’s case) pulling hair. A small crowd of younger boys had gathered and were chanting ‘fight, fight, fight!’ with obvious enjoyment, and Alex, Daisy and Faith were looking on anxiously, anger forgotten. Daisy in particular was in turmoil – she knew what Fergus had done to Mia, but she wasn’t sure she wanted him to get hurt too badly.


Liam was going in for the kill.


And what have I learnt from writing FREEING FERGUS REILLY?


Well, I was just about finished with FFR when I found the amazing writers' forum http://www.absolutewritewatercooler.com/ , and I learn so much from there that I realised what a trainwreck FFR actually was (hey, I was 16...). But emerald eyes, Mary-Sues, stereotypes and teachers who were more promiscuous than the Desperate Housewives aside, the most important thing I learnt was that edgy/gritty/dark contemporary YA was what I wanted to write the most. FFR wasn't exactly gritty, I'd call it a slightly edgy romance, but I realised I loved writing angst, so write angst I did. Oh, and I learn a heck of a lot about dialogue, grammar, and formatting, too.


Finally, thanks to Theresa and Cortney for this fab blogfest!

9 comments:

  1. That's great that you learned what you want to write. :)

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  2. Love that excerpt, what a great voice!! And I pictured the whole thing, well done! And I love edgy/gritty stuff too! Thanks for joining our bloghop! Good luck with your projects!

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  3. Absolute write is a great site. Understanding what it is you want to write is very important and I happen to love dark YA. :D Keep learning and writing!

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  4. Good luck with your revision. Hope the exam goes well.
    I enjoyed your excerpt. It has flavour and plenty of edge.
    I am glad you were able to identify what you enjoy writing.
    Fancy Liam being surprised that Fergus would decide to hit him back ;)

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  5. First off good luck with the revision! Just reading your topic made me exhausted. So I can only imagine.

    Now the excerpt: What did he do to Mia? I want to know. Love the action and how you gave us just a little bit to know he deserves what he is getting but maybe not all of it. Also the mention of his dad hitting him totally piqued my interest, making me want to know his back story.

    I love writing angst too just as much as I love reading it. Thanks for hopping with us and again good luck :)

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  6. Nice excerpt, and it's great that you learned what you wanted to write!

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  7. This is such a fun blogfest. I wish I'd found out about it sooner! Also I nominated you for a blog award!

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